Ryan Kimberlin
@chorald
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Joined Mar 2022 •
Active 2 years ago
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Ryan KimberlinMemberHere is a revised version of the song.
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Ryan KimberlinMemberThank you for the feedback. Those pesky P5’s 🙁
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Ryan KimberlinMemberVery nice. An idea would be on m11, b3 to use a I chord.
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Ryan KimberlinMemberThe harmonics fit the text. They (harmonics/chastening) are a bit unsettling at times, but then they resolve. Good work!
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Ryan KimberlinMemberAfter using it at an event this weekend, here is revised version. The “Father but by me” phrase has less movement, but it more stable harmonically.
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Ryan KimberlinMemberThank you for the feedback. I’m planning to use it in the near future, so I’ll “try it” and then revise as needed.
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Ryan KimberlinMemberLovely tune and chord progression.
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