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  • in reply to: In the Evening I Will Sing #3184

    Evan Bender
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    I don’t know very much about open 5ths. Could someone explain how or if they could be used?

  • in reply to: Thank You, Lord #3151

    Evan Bender
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    Here, finally, is the at-this-point-completed version of this piece.???? Wendell Glick helped with the timing and some harmonic issues.

  • in reply to: Thank You, Lord #2587

    Evan Bender
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    Thanks, I’ll update the pronouns to 21st century usage. (Unless upgrading pronouns makes me woke?????????)

    Also, Lynn, what would you recommend changing “severe mercy” to? I posted this poem on a small writer’s group I’m on and those two words caused discussion on there as well.???? I ended up keeping the term because I think it sounds cool and the jarring out-of-meterness fits the subject in my opinion, which was actually why I inserted it in the first place. ????

    I may as well confess my ignorance immediately. What exactly do you mean by more traditional harmonic progression for measure 9?????