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Reply To: Vincit Omnia Veritas

Home › Workshop Forums › Poem Critiques, Please › Vincit Omnia Veritas › Reply To: Vincit Omnia Veritas

September 5, 2024 at 9:35 pm #3584

Josiah Stauffer
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I like the progression of thought in the first stanza. Second stanza “They’ll her’ld ” twists my tongue a little but as a hymn text that might not matter as much.

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