Vincit Omnia Veritas

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    Rachel Kaufmann
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    Vincit Omnia Veritas

    1: Some day the clouds will parted be

    The King in state ride through.

    The heavens then shall pass away

    All things be made anew.

    Before He came a little babe:

    See star and angels rise.

    When He returns as King of King

    Behold the rifted skies!

    2: Some day we’ll hear the trumpet’s sound

    Across the hills of time.

    They’ll her’ld the coming Savior in

    Triumphant strains sublime.

    In glory shall the Lord return,

    His glory as the sun.

    The battles then shall all be o’er

    The victories all be won!

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  • #3584

    I like the progression of thought in the first stanza. Second stanza “They’ll her’ld ” twists my tongue a little but as a hymn text that might not matter as much.

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