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Thanks for the input, both of you!

How would this sound?

“In Him are life, and being found,

In Him our all in all.

In Him our glory and reward.

From Him life’s bounties fall.”

Or this?

“In Him are life, and being found,

In Him our all in all.

In Him our glory and reward.

Ours but to heed His call. ”