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December 28, 2022 at 10:02 pm
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Yolanda Lichty
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Thank you for the feedback, Rachel. The line the “weight of the world in His hands” uses the word “in” to refer to the nails that literally pierced His hands. Apparently, I was trying to be too clever and failed to communicate. I will look at this again. 🙂 Yolanda