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December 28, 2022 at 9:58 pm
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Yolanda Lichty
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Thank you, Michelle for your input. I share the same favourite lines with you. However, I’m actually quite attached to the word “stuff.” I look again at the lines you didn’t like. I’m not sure I’m satisfied with them either.