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September 24, 2022 at 1:45 am
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James Troyer
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Thank you, Michelle.
You raise some good questions. As I said, I wrote this years ago; I think my thought at that time was progression, night getting darker, until the eventual morning when we will bear His likeness. However, I think it might have been one of those poems where the “poem” was basically the first stanza, and everything thereafter was mostly filler material.
I will try to post a revised version within the next few days.
James