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Signs, and seals in gold, the past day’s story…. beautiful line. I like the feel of this poem… the last line seems to change that though- maybe it’s the presence of the exclamation mark and maybe it’s just me.

The middle two stanzas seem to be describing the same time as the themes are overlapping. Are you going for chronological order here?

Overall- lovely piece.