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Gary Yoder
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Thanks Lynn, I thought about that as well. One concern I have is that paralleling the rhythm in those measures could make it more “boxy”, or too predictable. But then, in a piece this short, consistency should probably be a higher priority than variety. Hmmm… I’ll muddle on this one a bit more.

Just noticed a sneaky parallel octave in measure four too…

I’ll probably do another round of editing on this one, although I think it’s getting pretty close to it’s final form.