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Yes, Sherri. With Lynn I really like this piece. Good work.

The last line of stanza 2, I think, is fine. I wouldn’t worry about changing it unless something really grabs you as being better. Line 1 of stanza 3 could perhaps be clarified by saying “When human (or earthly) love betrays her trust…” but that is up to you.

James