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June 29, 2022 at 2:43 pm
#2523

Lyndon Gehman
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Gary, I really like the harmonies in this piece!
Every time I sing the melody, I want to go up to the A on the last note of measure 4.
Personally, I think the weakest part of this hymn is measures 5 and 6. I like what you’ve done harmonically, but melodically it feels like it prevents the piece from having a very satisfying climax.
Overall I do really like this piece though!