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May 31, 2022 at 4:46 pm
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Michelle King
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I added a few more changes. I have think it’s finished… thoughts?
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Let me draw near to Your bleeding side.
Let me touch the marks in Your hands and feet.
Let me bear the cross of the crucified.
Let me give my life, as You have for me.
Let me live this day, for Thee only, Lord.
Let me count earth’s gain only vanity.
Let me lose myself for Thine own accord.
Let me give my life, as You have for me.