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May 3, 2022 at 12:57 am
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Michelle King
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Thanks for the suggestions… I added a few changes.
Let me draw near to Your bleeding side.
Let me touch the marks in Your hands and feet.
Let me bear the cross of the crucified.
Let me give my life, as You have for me.
Let me lose myself as I’m lost in You.
Let me count earth’s gain only vanity.
Let me love You more than my words can tell.
Let me give my life, as You have for me.