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Reply To: King and God and Sacrifice

Home › Workshop Forums › Poem Critiques, Please › King and God and Sacrifice › Reply To: King and God and Sacrifice

April 27, 2022 at 9:28 pm #2434

Yolanda Lichty
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I’d be interested in input on the phrase by the *. It seems trite to me. I’d welcome any suggestions of how to change it. Any other input is also welcome.

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