Don’t Let Me Lose the Wonder

[Ryan Kimberlin]

This is a hymn tune I composed over 10 years ago and I keep coming back to revise it. I’d welcome any comments!

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[Lynn Martin]

I like this overall. The thing that bothers me somewhat is the similarity between the second and third lines. They’re only slightly different, so it doesn’t feel like the tune is building in a direction until we get to the final line.

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