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November 30, 2022 at 4:03 pm
#3069

Lynn Martin
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I like this! The only issue I see is that “Sol-Fa-Re” at the end of the first phrase isn’t an intuitive soprano line. I’d change it to “Sol-Mi-Re” if possible, which also reflects what happens later in the song. It would necessitate harmonic changes, though.