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Ben,

This is very nice.

Two small suggestions I might make:

1. If you started the opening soprano pickup with a Do-Re eighth note slur, it might have a touch more continuity with the beginning of the second half of the song.
2. I might suggest changing the first chord in measure 12 to a vii chord instead of the IV. It would prevent the V – VII progression. See attached suggestion.

I do love the simplicity of this piece.

-Lyndon