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Reply To: Blessed Are Those

Home › Workshop Forums › Poem Critiques, Please › Blessed Are Those › Reply To: Blessed Are Those

June 16, 2022 at 7:13 pm #2474

Rachel Kaufmann
Member

Have you considered changing the meter to 8s and 7s or 8s and 6s instead of 8/8? It might flow better.

For example:

Blessed are those whose way is peace;

Whose desire is righteousness.

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