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June 16, 2022 at 7:13 pm
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Rachel Kaufmann
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Have you considered changing the meter to 8s and 7s or 8s and 6s instead of 8/8? It might flow better.
For example:
Blessed are those whose way is peace;
Whose desire is righteousness.