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March 30, 2022 at 6:24 pm
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Lyndon Gehman
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Lynn, I love the Early American feel of this! Good work.
Two minor thoughts I had after a quick listen:
Changing the fourth note from the end in the bass to a C would eliminate the parallel octave (though with folk type music that is slightly less of an issue.
Measures 11-12 felt slightly problematic to be, because of the sudden change in harmonic rhythm.