Church Music Hub | James Troyer | Activity https://hub.musiccamp.info/members/jim/activity/ Activity feed for James Troyer. Thu, 20 Aug 2026 15:00:47 +0000 https://buddypress.org/?v=2.14.0 en-US 30 hourly 2 6a2a259e4895f9df0a7a0ac75dd53b94 James Troyer replied to the discussion Let Me Behold in the forum Poem Critiques, Please https://hubmusiccamp-burk1.tempurl.host/forums/discussion/let-me-behold/#post-2594 Fri, 29 Jul 2022 14:06:49 +0000 Reply to Let Me Behold

Yes, Sherri. With Lynn I really like this piece. Good work.

The last line of stanza 2, I think, is fine. I wouldn’t worry about changing it unless something really grabs you as being better. Line 1 of stanza 3 could perhaps be clarified by saying “When human (or earthly) love betrays her trust…” but that is up to you.

James

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